Showing posts with label The Krang. Show all posts
Showing posts with label The Krang. Show all posts

Wednesday, February 09, 2011

Short Story Ahoy!

Some weeks back, the good folk at Severed Press asked me to submit a short story to their new horror anthology DEAD BAIT II which is, obviously enough, a follow-up to their DEAD BAIT collection. He wanted a story from me there to help in promotion for THE LIVING END (which makes sense). So I asked about the anthology guidelines.

"Horror story that involves fishing," he told me.

Well, that's pretty simple. I figured I could have a go at it.

My initial thought was to come up with something within the world of THE LIVING END. I had a partial of what was to have been a chapter in that book and decided that I could flesh it out and at least connect it in some way to fishing, even if it was in an oblique manner. So I turned it out and sent it in.

Well, it was too oblique. I had to admit that the fishing connection was tenuous. It bounced back. No problem.

I decided to take another jab at it and came up with an idea, then turned it into a plot and got to work. In pretty quick order I had the story up to 1800 words. This one more closely attuned to the concept of fishing, even if it wasn't--strictly speaking--the kind of fishing most people think of when the activity comes to mind. I was feeling pretty good about the tale.

And then.

I hit a brick wall.

That may be putting it lightly. More like a wall of pure neutronium. The more I worked on the story, the more it just wasn't going to gel. I have to like a story to finish it, and I just didn't want to spend any more time with this. I agonized over it and was getting pretty desperate.

Then ye editor emailed asking if I was finished. He had a deadline looming. A publishing deadline, folk, which is a lot different from a writing deadline.

I stressed a bit. I thought.

And suddenly I recalled the plot of a fishing story I was going to write and never did. I'm talking like twenty-five years ago. Back before my son was even born a friend had asked me to write a story set in a shared fantasy world he'd concocted and I jotted down what I figured was a good idea and the project never came to light. And I pretty much forgot about the plot. Until, of course, I needed it.

But that was all it was--merely an image of a beggar with an atrophied arm and a warrior adrift on a vast lake fishing for something a bit more nasty than a trout. With that picture in my noggin I sat down at the keyboard at 7:30 pm and began writing. The story came flowing out the way they do when everything is perfect. By 11:30 pm I had a 4500-word story that was there, solid and just about perfect. I emailed it to my editor. I didn't tell him it wasn't the story I'd been working on previously, but something that had just been created minutes before.

The next day I made some very minor adjustments and sent him the (slightly) improved version. I'm really damned happy with the story, which I called "The Krang".

Look for it in DEAD BAIT II coming from Severed Press.

"YAR!"